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The sentences that come from your mouth mean nothing!
They are like a hazy summer’s day,
Glazed with an impenetrable array of miscellaneous words.
You try to sound as sophisticated and proper as you can,
But I know what you’re really thinking.
You pour words out of your mouth like a mighty river,
Covered with repetition and insincerity.
You talk about the mistakes that you’ve made,
But you don’t mean a word you say!
Quit telling me these lies,
Thinking that I can’t comprehend what you’re saying!
Your hypocrisy disgusts me.
I don’t want those long ill-conceited prayers,
Thinking that you’ll impress me enough to become forgiven.
All I want from you is a humble heart,
And a willing soul.
Only after you have given me that,
Will you truly have,
Salvation
©2008-2009 ~Seawithinthefish
:iconseawithinthefish:

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All He wants, is humility

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:iconsingoutloud-xd:
love it man, the only thing i can see bad is the use of impenetrable like the person before me commented. other than that its great!

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Love is (willingly!) Patient.
:iconseawithinthefish:
Haha, I must have missed that part. Thanks for telling me!

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"I'm self-depressed at how well I can put myself down"
:iconsingoutloud-xd:
haha how you fixed it is perfect! love it man.

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Love is (willingly!) Patient.
:iconsmilesonmonday:
AH. Josh. This is great. It's like watching a Catholic priest babble.

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-since when did what we pay for colored cloth gauge our gravity?
:iconseawithinthefish:
ahhah... Is that a good thing?

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"I'm self-depressed at how well I can put myself down"
:iconsmilesonmonday:
yes it is a good thing because i feel like that's the picture you are trying to create with this poem. unless i'm totally off, haha!

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-since when did what we pay for colored cloth gauge our gravity?

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